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Sesi329

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Final Draft

Post by Sesi329 » Tue Jan 10, 2012 11:19 am

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Last edited by Sesi329 on Mon Apr 23, 2012 5:45 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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JasonR

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Re: FINAL Draft Let me know if theirs anything i can correct plz

Post by JasonR » Tue Jan 10, 2012 1:21 pm

It's still too long. You reduced it to 1,104 words from 1,274, but it really shouldn't be longer than ~850 words, and 750-800 would be better. I just skimmed it very quickly, but even then I noticed several typos, word omissions, etc.
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CanadianWolf

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Re: FINAL Draft Let me know if theirs anything i can correct plz

Post by CanadianWolf » Tue Jan 10, 2012 3:59 pm

OP: Correct your thread title & you may get more readers.
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