This PS or That? Forum

[onefatbovine]

Hi Everyone,

I have a bit of a dilemma: A few months ago, I wrote a personal statement but then abandoned it (when it was almost complete!) because I thought the story was too weak, and I wasn't sure where I was going to it. So, I wrote another one which I thought was sure to be a better topic. That is, until I revisited my old PS and realized the old one actually isn't all that bad. Now, I don't know which PS to use. Can someone give me their opinion on which will make a stronger PS? Let me know if you can help, and I will PM them to you. Thanks!

[FishOil]

I am willing to give them a look

[onefatbovine]

FishOil,

I already made my decision on which PS to use. I posted it in another topic, so please take a look. Any criticism is welcome!