Anyone willing to critique a very personal/emotional PS? Forum

[lovefoolosophy]

Hi,

I wrote a rough draft of a personal statement that contains details of a very emotional/intimate event for me.
For that reason, I am a little reluctant to post the full PS on the forum for everyone to see.

From what I've seen, TLSers seem to give very helpful and straightforward feedback.
If anyone is willing to take a look at my rough draft, please let me know.
I welcome any kind of critique on the content, wordings, grammar, etc.

Thank you so much in advance.

[Trex]

I'll be happy to look at yours if you want to take a look at mine.

[lovefoolosophy]

I'd love to. I will PM you my PS. Please do the same

[LSurvivor]

I also wrote my PS on a sensitive topic. It is not fully complete, but I was wondering if we could critique each other's. Let me know if you are willing to give feedback and I will PM you

[Mackey2012]

I'm in the same boat. Would be happy to swap with anyone.

[ashleyrenee]

I am willing to swamp, mine is super personal/emotional as well - PM me if interested