Possibly take a look at my PS? Forum
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FryBreadPower
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Possibly take a look at my PS?
Sort of in the middle draft stages. Definitely have the skeleton/story that i want to use but need to clean up sentence structure to make each sentence more effective. Would love to have anyone take a look at it; PM me if you are interested!
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FryBreadPower
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Re: Possibly take a look at my PS?
Bump. Didn't mention it but I am happy to swap statements and return the favor for anyone who would have a few minutes to help me out!FryBreadPower wrote:Sort of in the middle draft stages. Definitely have the skeleton/story that i want to use but need to clean up sentence structure to make each sentence more effective. Would love to have anyone take a look at it; PM me if you are interested!
