This is a first crack at a PS. I'm not really sure how it turned out. Constructive Criticism appreciated, thanks.
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Rough Draft Antitrust PS Forum
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LSHopeful91
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Rough Draft Antitrust PS
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NervousNelly
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Re: Rough Draft Antitrust PS
Good topic. Lots of long sentences. A lot of them could be cut in half.
