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uflaw2012

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PS review?

Post by uflaw2012 » Sat Oct 22, 2011 12:05 am

Just finished a first draft..I read it and like some parts..then I read it and think I'm totally off base by telling my story..thoughts? Be kind..thanks
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Re: PS review?

Post by uflaw2012 » Sat Oct 22, 2011 1:37 pm

Somebody? Anybody?
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Re: PS review?

Post by CanadianWolf » Sat Oct 22, 2011 1:46 pm

Despite a few small omissions or errors, this is a well-written & convincing law school personal statement.

P.S. The transition from the seventh paragraph to the eigth (IRS audit) paragraph is a bit awkward.
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