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Critique my 250 essay? Be as honest as you can :)

Post by fingerscrossedxx » Fri Oct 21, 2011 8:08 pm

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Re: Critique my 250 essay? Be as honest as you can :)

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Re: Critique my 250 essay? Be as honest as you can :)

Post by fingerscrossedxx » Fri Oct 21, 2011 11:41 pm

Thanks for those great catches! The sentences you said you didnt know about weere the exact two I wasn't sure if I was getting my point across. Will revise. Thanks again!
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