PS - Catchy? Do you get the point? Forum
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coobs
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PS - Catchy? Do you get the point?
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kaiser
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Re: PS - Catchy? Do you get the point?
I think you have the template for what will be a very good PS. Not going to go into details, but take out the thing at the end about kids fresh out of school. Its unnecessary since you already spoke to your years of life experience. The reader can make the obvious inference about the point you are trying to make without you forcing it at the end. But certainly an interesting and rather dramatic statement. I'd definitely go with this as a template as you continue to refine and edit.
