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daydreamer · Post by **daydreamer** » Thu Oct 20, 2011 9:33 pm

Thanks for your help.

kublaikahn · Post by **kublaikahn** » Fri Oct 21, 2011 12:05 am

daydreamer · Post by **daydreamer** » Fri Oct 21, 2011 12:50 pm

Thanks kublaikahn. Anyone else have any advice?

CanadianWolf · Post by **CanadianWolf** » Sat Oct 22, 2011 10:45 am

"effect change", not "affect change" The first means to bring about change, while the second means to have an impact on change already brought about.

The first opening paragraph is better, in my opinion.

CONSIDER: "My experiences have helped me to achieve clarity through the hardships that accompany adversity."

daydreamer · Post by **daydreamer** » Sat Oct 22, 2011 10:52 am

Thanks, CW. Would you recommend any more changes? Do you think it's pretty much final draft ready?

CanadianWolf · Post by **CanadianWolf** » Sat Oct 22, 2011 10:54 am

After one read, my impression is that this is a final draft.

daydreamer · Post by **daydreamer** » Sat Oct 22, 2011 11:00 am

Thanks, sometimes reaffirmation is all one needs.

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