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Re: ROUGH Draft of Personal Statement...PLEASE critique

Post by CanadianWolf » Mon Oct 10, 2011 12:13 pm

Not good. Two sentences on redistricting would be enough. Too much repitition, too little insight. Too many obvious & careless errors. This personal statement may harm your chances for admission to highly selective law schools due to careless errors & lack of insight.

P.S. My impression, ironically, is that you don't have a clue about the true purpose of redistricting.
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