Personal statment - looking for advice/critique Forum

[nygrl]

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[CanadianWolf]

"Although I could have easily taken a van to the finish line," is a memorable line that is likely to distinguish your law school personal statement about one's first marathon from the other several thousand similiar essays.

This is a safe & predictable personal statement--at the expense of originality--that is unlikely to help or hurt your chances of admission to law school.

[Woobinator11]

8 x 800 meter repeats where I maintained a three minute pace per lap

When you say per lap, so you mean per 800 meters or per lap on a track?

[nygrl]

I mean 800 meters. I will clarify that going forward.

Thanks for the feedback!