Any advice or improvements is greatly appreciated. it is 1000 words. please leave advice or edits in red.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OhA ... t?hl=en_US
Request can someone proofread my law school personal stateme Forum
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come2gether
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Re: Request can someone proofread my law school personal stateme
I hope my points weren't too rough.
Your PS is a good start. It incorporates some innovative ideas but, as I pointed out, there are some parts that weaken your central theme of law through technological innovation/collaboration/internet.
Edit: BTW, on a personal note... I think it's pretty cool that the avenue in which you've selected to get comments on your personal statement fits so well with your theme.
Your PS is a good start. It incorporates some innovative ideas but, as I pointed out, there are some parts that weaken your central theme of law through technological innovation/collaboration/internet.
Edit: BTW, on a personal note... I think it's pretty cool that the avenue in which you've selected to get comments on your personal statement fits so well with your theme.
