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Non-Urm DS needs critique! Pls Help!

Post by beta » Tue Aug 16, 2011 10:30 am

thanks for the feedback--ill try to tighten up some language!
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Re: Non-Urm DS needs critique! Pls Help!

Post by spek » Tue Aug 16, 2011 11:51 am

I liked this. It read well and it was clear and concise. I think you tied it well to your interest in law and I liked the example you gave about how you were able to turn these ideas into fruitful discussions with your peers. I think if you tighten up the language a bit it will work well. Good luck!
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Re: Non-Urm DS needs critique! Pls Help!

Post by CanadianWolf » Tue Aug 16, 2011 12:04 pm

Interesting & enjoyable to read ! Plus, now I know the definition of "ascetic".
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