Looking for Critics to Review My PS Forum

[tmon]

I've got a somewhat rough edit of my PS done. It's mainly about discovering my motivation to pursue a legal career. At this point I'm mostly concerned with whether the substance is suitable/interesting/genuine sounding. It also discusses doubts I used to have about law school, so I'm worried that there might be some negatives I shouldn't include even though I talk about overcoming them. If anyone's up for giving me their opinion I'm happy to PM it. Thanks

[moopness]

I'll take a look, though having just finished my preptest I don't know if I can give you the critical eye towards grammar and syntax and whatnot, but definitely big picture stuff like you mentioned.