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Deleted by author. Thanks everyone!

Post by LAWLADI2011 » Thu May 05, 2011 4:00 pm

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Re: Feedback please!!

Post by glitter178 » Thu May 05, 2011 4:03 pm

this reads like an SAT vocabulary lesson. I would scrap this and start over, focusing more on one issue rather than throwing out several without developing any of them.
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Re: Feedback please!!

Post by LAWLADI2011 » Thu May 05, 2011 4:47 pm

Can you delete my PS from your comments, please? Thanks. I'd rather not have the old one here.
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