Hello everyone. I've contacted quite a few people about my personal statement and am nearing my final draft. Since I am nearing my final draft I could really use some HARSH and competent critiquers/editors to help me out. However I'm sure that the best critiquers are very busy people. So I am using the Capitalism approach and
I am offering $5 sent via Paypal to anyone who can give me a SOLID critique of my paper and help me turn it into an Ivy-worthy piece. I'll even swap with you in addition to paying you! I have a couple of things I would like help with specifically. If you are interested shoot me a PM. The key here though is that I need some REALLY competent critiquers - people with writing experience and others with Ivy ambitions come to mind.
I'm not an elitist or anything so if you are neither of these and think you are a competent critiquer please feel free to PM me. Even f you don't give me the best advice I will definitely still be up to swap!
I've done about twenty edits/critiques now so I should be helpful!
UPDATE: Wow only 35 minutes and I've already had quite a few people contact me. I've emailed my essay to two people who agreed to go over it for $5. Once I hear back from them and make the suggested changes I will probably require additional assistance. In the meantime anyone interested please send me a PM and I will PM you back if I need any more help. Thanks to everyone who has already contacted me!!
