Adversity Statement - any advice? Forum
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futurelawstudent23
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Adversity Statement - any advice?
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CanadianWolf
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Re: Adversity Statement - any advice?
Unfortunately, your experiences are not unique so you may want to consider deleting that word from your last paragraph.
Overall your adversity statement is well written & interesting, but the last paragraph should be revised to show that you are more than the product of these tragic life occurrences.
Overall your adversity statement is well written & interesting, but the last paragraph should be revised to show that you are more than the product of these tragic life occurrences.
