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[tarakit]

Removed.

[jasonc.]

it perfectly fine...but it feels like some sort of optional essay rather than a ps...may you can condense the Darfur story?

[tarakit]

someone else told me this as well. should I delete the third paragraph and add on more to the fourth and fifth paragraphs? or should i just delete the 3rd and be done with it? it would be about a page and a half without that paragraph.

[jasonc.]

yes! it can do without the third paragraph

[tarakit]

is there anything that I should talk more about? or should i just leave it without that paragraph?

[jasonc.]

the example is good just "show" more of your interest in international law?

[tarakit]

I'm actually not interested in international law... I'm interested in regulatory law, though I wasn't really trying to emphasize that much in my PS. I have a very strong technical background that will come across in my resume, so I was trying to talk about interests I have that would be relevant to law... Did I go about this the wrong way?

[jasonc.]

o h okay your good! i missed the part where you said "fused advocacy" everything ties in.