Anybody willing to critique my Final PS and DS? Forum
- URMdan
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Anybody willing to critique my Final PS and DS?
After rewriting my PS and DS countless times, I finally have a final draft ready for critiquing. Any takers?
- URMdan
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Re: Anybody willing to critique my Final PS and DS?
I need help with my last sentence. If anybody can help me drive home my PS at the very end, please PM me.