Confucianism DS..bad? Forum

atkpl · Post by **atkpl** » Fri Nov 26, 2010 4:41 am

it's a first draft..

I tried to show Confucianism is not a religion.

Besides all the grammar errors and awkward wordings, do you guys think the content itself is ok??

I am applying to Fordham, do you think adcomm at Fordham will hate this content?

I really appreciate your time reading it.

sophia.olive · Post by **sophia.olive** » Sat Nov 27, 2010 2:42 am

better.

Needs to be a little more clear.

Saltqjibo · Post by **Saltqjibo** » Sat Nov 27, 2010 3:40 am

This is way better than your last DS, you will need to get someone with strong grammer / editing skills to go over it before you hand it in though.

You Gotta Have Faith · Post by **You Gotta Have Faith** » Sat Nov 27, 2010 3:49 am

Saltqjibo wrote:This is way better than your last DS, you will need to get someone with strong grammer / editing skills to go over it before you hand it in though.

hehehe, I'm sorry... I had to...

But it's in good spirit, I promise.

sophia.olive · Post by **sophia.olive** » Sat Nov 27, 2010 4:00 am

Saltqjibo wrote:This is way better than your last DS, you will need to get someone with strong grammers / editing skills to go over it before you hand it in though.

Saltqjibo · Post by **Saltqjibo** » Sat Nov 27, 2010 4:22 am

That's why I didn't try to help him

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