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canes
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glitter178
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Re: Diversity Statement - Turning in SOON, needs some help
is this the whole thing? we don't find out you're cuban until the last paragraph. start with that, since otherwise they aren't going to get it. The idea is that adcomms are going to be looking at a ton of apps, and they want to get the point you are making IMMEDIATELY. In fact, this whole thing really needs to be rewritten, sorry 
. the point is just never really made-- that is, if you are trying to make a point about why you are a candidate for special attention due to diversity, you're not doing it well.
. the point is just never really made-- that is, if you are trying to make a point about why you are a candidate for special attention due to diversity, you're not doing it well.
