I'm looking for somebody to critique both my PS and DS because they compliment one another. I'm not concerned so much with grammatical errors, as the kind folks here at TLS who have already critiqued my previous drafts have highlighted them already, but rather how well both compliment one another, if there is more that I can do to enhance them, and if I am redundant.
Although I can't promise an expert critique, I would happily swap PS or DS critiques.
Anybody willing to critique my Final PS and DS? Forum
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Re: Anybody willing to critique my Final PS and DS?
Sureeee, send em over.
URMdan wrote:I'm looking for somebody to critique both my PS and DS because they compliment one another. I'm not concerned so much with grammatical errors, as the kind folks here at TLS who have already critiqued my previous drafts have highlighted them already, but rather how well both compliment one another, if there is more that I can do to enhance them, and if I am redundant.
Although I can't promise an expert critique, I would happily swap PS or DS critiques.