Revamped PS - Second Draft - Please Offer Input! Forum

[ATR]

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[Sandro]

I like your writing style. I'm going to steal it. It doesnt have "I want to go to law school because XXXX" at the end of beginning so I like that part too.

[ATR]

I like your writing style. I'm going to steal it. It doesnt have "I want to go to law school because XXXX" at the end of beginning so I like that part too.

Thanks, I appreciate the compliments.

[Sandro]

Do you have any tips for translating things that occurred at work into something that isnt boring as hell to read?

[ATR]

Do you have any tips for translating things that occurred at work into something that isnt boring as hell to read?

Well, this was my third try at a statement. I concentrated using active verbs, being descriptive (but not overly so), and adding my own personal thoughts to break the monotony of excessive story-telling. Just keep working at it. I'd also suggest going to your school's writing center, if you're enrolled. It really helped me.

[ATR]

Bumping... I would appreciate any input; I'm hoping to start sending off applications in the next week.