Would someone be kind enough to read my PS & DS? Forum

[sankara]

I have completed both my PS and DS. I would really appreciate a good read from some of the experienced posters/past cycle applicants on the forum. I would prefer to PM both so please let me know if you would be willing.

Thanks!

[tourdeforcex]

feel free to PM. also indicate how critical you prefer me to be on a scale of 1 to 7.

[sankara]

Finished another round of revision. I think it's a good read. I touched on diversity but I want to make sure it was not overwhelming. Additionally, I was advised by a prelaw adviser to make no remote references to my lackluster GPA. However, referencing this in my first paragraph ties into my message of triumph. I am hoping for a good of this before turning it over to the adviser to read.

[sankara]

feel free to PM. also indicate how critical you prefer me to be on a scale of 1 to 7.

Hey! Thanks. I shot you a PM. Anybody else? You would really be helping me out. Trying to get these apps out by next week.

[sankara]

i've had some great feedback thus far. interested in swapping statements with anyone who is in the latter/finished stages of both statements.

[deathviaboredom]

I have a couple of statements in the later stages. Swap?

[sankara]

I have a couple of statements in the later stages. Swap?

sounds good.