Personal Statement about Defending Terrorists (Rough Draft)

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Personal Statement about Defending Terrorists (Rough Draft)

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Re: Personal Statement about Defending Terrorists (Rough Draft)

Post by CanadianWolf » Tue Oct 12, 2010 4:58 pm

You have turned three short paragraphs of material into seven repetitive paragraphs. Lawyers are no longer paid by the word. Think quality not quantity.

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Re: Personal Statement about Defending Terrorists (Rough Draft)

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Taken down per OP's request.
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Guantanamo was misspelled.

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Re: Personal Statement about Defending Terrorists (Rough Draft)

Post by bdubs » Sat Oct 16, 2010 9:48 pm

Can you more articulately say what exactly it was you did in assisting in Raja's defense? Reading this it just sounds like you listened to wiretaps. Were there any real outcomes or tangible lessons learned?

It seems a little too philosophical and not very concrete despite the fact that you did actual work.
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Re: Personal Statement about Defending Terrorists (Rough Draft)

Post by kwais » Sat Oct 16, 2010 10:31 pm

thegovernor wrote:It's cool that your into defending terrorists...douche
good one. and sweet avatar. I bet you are really smart. how awesome is Palin?

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