Read my PS? Thanks in advance. Forum
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agenthero
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Read my PS? Thanks in advance.
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agenthero
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Re: Read my PS? Thanks in advance.
No thoughts?
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CanadianWolf
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Re: Read my PS? Thanks in advance.
Not good. Your essay seems to be a superficial accounting of various news stories & experiences that you have encountered over the past few years.
In all seriousness, you lost credibility in your first paragraph by suggesting equal pay for elementary school teachers & a successful SEC football coach. The rest of your personal statement is overly simplistic & does nothing to make your candidacy more attractive to law schools.
On the positive side, you write well, but there should be more depth in your thoughts.
In all seriousness, you lost credibility in your first paragraph by suggesting equal pay for elementary school teachers & a successful SEC football coach. The rest of your personal statement is overly simplistic & does nothing to make your candidacy more attractive to law schools.
On the positive side, you write well, but there should be more depth in your thoughts.
Last edited by CanadianWolf on Tue Aug 24, 2010 12:18 am, edited 2 times in total.
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agenthero
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Re: Read my PS? Thanks in advance.
Thank you.
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