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Tanicius's Personal Statement

Post by Tanicius » Mon Aug 23, 2010 1:43 am

Hello guys. I'd like to private message my PS. This is the first full, advanced draft of my PS I've managed to write, and so I'm looking for hardcore, macro-level criticisms, as well as iffy judgments you formed as a reader due to certain phrasing/vocab. Anyone willing to read it and provide in depth commentary? As an aside, I like critiquing other PS's myself, so if you're up for a trade so am I.

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Re: Tanicius's Personal Statement

Post by Knock » Mon Aug 23, 2010 1:55 am

Tanicius wrote:Hello guys. I'd like to private message my PS. This is the first full, advanced draft of my PS I've managed to write, and so I'm looking for hardcore, macro-level criticisms, as well as iffy judgments you formed as a reader due to certain phrasing/vocab. Anyone willing to read it and provide in depth commentary? As an aside, I like critiquing other PS's myself, so if you're up for a trade so am I.
Just cuz you've been really encouraging to me.........send me a PM and i'll give you my general thoughts! :mrgreen:

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Re: Tanicius's Personal Statement

Post by Tanicius » Mon Aug 23, 2010 1:56 am

Knockglock wrote:
Tanicius wrote:Hello guys. I'd like to private message my PS. This is the first full, advanced draft of my PS I've managed to write, and so I'm looking for hardcore, macro-level criticisms, as well as iffy judgments you formed as a reader due to certain phrasing/vocab. Anyone willing to read it and provide in depth commentary? As an aside, I like critiquing other PS's myself, so if you're up for a trade so am I.
Just cuz you've been really encouraging to me.........send me a PM and i'll give you my general thoughts! :mrgreen:
Thanks a bunch!

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Re: Tanicius's Personal Statement

Post by ArchRoark » Mon Aug 23, 2010 2:21 am

I will swap with you. Send it over.

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Re: Tanicius's Personal Statement

Post by Tanicius » Mon Aug 23, 2010 2:35 am

Tiva wrote:I will swap with you. Send it over.
Thank you sir.

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