A Splitter's PS Forum
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Marionberry
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A Splitter's PS
Anyone want to read my PS? It doesn't actually have anything to do with the fact that I'm a splitter, but it needs to be extra good to compensate for my crapfest of a GPA. I'll swap or whatever, I just don't want to post it on here because I'm unreasonably paranoid. It's not crazy or anything, though.
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Knock
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Re: A Splitter's PS
I'll attest that it is a good PSMarionberry wrote:Anyone want to read my PS? It doesn't actually have anything to do with the fact that I'm a splitter, but it needs to be extra good to compensate for my crapfest of a GPA. I'll swap or whatever, I just don't want to post it on here because I'm unreasonably paranoid. It's not crazy or anything, though.
. Have you changed it much since I last read it?-
Marionberry
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Re: A Splitter's PS
Not really. I don't think that there's much more I can do at this point, but I'm open to any suggestions that might just completely blow my mind and make it that much better. Advice of this nature is welcome 
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Knock
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Re: A Splitter's PS
Haha, I second that requestMarionberry wrote:Not really. I don't think that there's much more I can do at this point, but I'm open to any suggestions that might just completely blow my mind and make it that much better. Advice of this nature is welcome
. I'd pm Billyez and Canadianwolf, they are some of the regulars in the PS forum and helped me out a lot.
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ArchRoark
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Re: A Splitter's PS
I'll take a look, but I am only feel comfortable speaking to the content/thematic elements rather then grammatical issues.
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mcnabb5
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Re: A Splitter's PS
i'll take a look as well
