PS Critiques please :) Forum

[flynavyjets]

Hello, everyone!!

I was wondering if anyone had some free time to critique my PS draft. Please respond if you are interested and I will send it via pm. I can also post it on here if it seems like a lot of people want to read it.

I also have a really dumb question about the PS: when reading the best ones on this site, I noticed that they had titles. Should I title my personal statement, or is that just so that the best PS's can be more easily identified?

Thank you in advance!

[billyez]

Don't include titles.

I've had a bunch of PS's PM'd to me it seems in the last couple of weeks and I didn't feel like reading another one...but then I saw "navy" in your username and my personal experience compelled me to accept this opportunity. PM it when you get the chance.

[PrincessLexiRae]

PM it to me and I'll take a look.