I would appreciate any help in reviewing my first draft Forum

[lakerfanimal]

PM me if you could help me out. It's really long right now, and it's extremely rough, I'm just looking for some feedback on what I should cut-out and how I can condense things.

Thanks a bunch!

[Total Litigator]

the best way to do this is to just post your PS.

I really really doubt anyone is going to PM you.

[billyez]

The above actually isn't true. There's been more than a few threads where this has been the method to get a review and it works fine. That being said, unless there's something you really don't want others to know about that's in the context of your PS, I would just post it. It'll increase the likelihood of getting reviews.

[bk1]

I'll take a PM of it.

Actually I've found that posting it doesn't necessarily increase reviews, it really depends on how much free time the people who like to review have and whether they feel like reviewing it when you make your post. But it will probably increase the chances.

[lakerfanimal]

Thanks for the feedback guys. It's just reallly long right now, so I want to get a couple people's advice on where I should shorten it up, and then I might post it after that when I feel like it actually fits the proper length. I'll pm you bk, thanks a bunch!

[brochocinco]

I'll take a PM too if you're willing to read mine as well. It's extremely rough but need to start somewhere.