Extremely Rough Draft Forum

[wijo0305]

I haven't really edited it and it is no way properly organized, just want some pointers if I am heading a reasonably effective direction.

Also, not really interested in the one-liner "you're a douche, burn it" remarks so hoping I can PM or E-mail it to some people that will actually give worthwhile advice.

Please post or PM if you're willing to take a look at it.

Thanks

[billyez]

I'll read it.

[wijo0305]

I'll read it.

Thanks, I PM'ed it to you.