NEED A CRITIQUE AND CLOSE UNFINISHED PERSONAL STATMENT Forum
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NEED A CRITIQUE AND CLOSE UNFINISHED PERSONAL STATMENT
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Re: NEED A CRITIQUE AND CLOSE UNFINISHED PERSONAL STATMENT
This needs some pretty serious editing for grammar/punctuation/style.
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Re: NEED A CRITIQUE AND CLOSE UNFINISHED PERSONAL STATMENT
Thanks for the advice!
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