Last Day for DS Revision - Need help ASAP Forum

[superhopefulwoo]

Thank you all! I'm trying to shorten it a little more... coming up in a moment!

[superhopefulwoo]

I THINK I am pretty much ready to turn this in along with my apps... but if you have any last few tips or even a way to cut this down a little more, please let me know. Overall I am really happy with this product, and I definitely have to thank B90, bluepenguin, and YouNeverKnow, and (last but not least!) stuckinthemiddle for the progress - your CONSTRUCTIVE, informative, and optimistic feedback encouraged me to even get here. SO THANKS Just wanted to shout out because I feel so good about almost being done... :p
Yes, I know, ALMOST!

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