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				gregthomas77
 
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Re: 2nd Draft (or total rewrite) - Can I get a critique?
2nd version posted.
			
			
									
									
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				gregthomas77
 
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				gregthomas77
 
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Re: 2nd Draft (or total rewrite) - Is it better? worse?
help me. i have ANOTHER snow day (of course they told me after I got there), so I have time to write.
			
			
									
									
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				gregthomas77
 
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Re: 2nd Draft (or total rewrite) - Is it better? worse?
wasting my snow day bump
			
			
									
									
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				gregthomas77
 
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Re: Can I get some suggestions on my PS 2nd draft?
evening bump hoping someone will read this.  I got such a quick response last time (all negative mind you) it kind of scares me I haven't heard anything on this version.
			
			
									
									
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