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[WhirledWorld]

Bumping for the updated 250 at the top.

[CanadianWolf]

Several years ago I read a high school student's college essay on the same topic of yodeling. It was done very well. Your yodeling essay is interesting in the respect that it compares group singing to the composition of a diverse law school class creating group strength. This is a well done essay that should land on friendly eyes at a capella-happy Yale (Whiffenpoofs).

[heyguys]

again, I like the yodeling theme. This time, I think that the take away at the end comes across as banal.

And again, on the PS--just nix the whole thing and start over, assuming the one on the first post to be the one that you're going with.