Anyone willing to take a look at my diversity essay? Forum

[Knock]

So i'm applying for a week-long summer program. I have to write a maximum of a 500 word essay on diversity. I finished a really rough draft, and I was wondering if someone wouldn't mind looking at it, and giving me some feedback, and pointing me in the direction I should take as I work towards the final draft.

Thank you.

[MusicNutMeggie]

I'd be happy to take a look, if you'd like. PM it to me?

[trialjunky]

Feel free to PM me

[Angelica Pickles]

I'll take a look at it.

[Warren Harding]

PM me if you'd like.

[trialjunky]

This is from May 24th...let it go

[Knock]

Actually it's still on the table...just had to take a long break from it due to the June LSAT.

It's due June 10th so I need to make significant re-writes and would appreciate if ppl could look at it at that point.

Thanks so much for reading it, MusicNutMeggie, your advice was really helpful!

[MusicNutMeggie]

Actually it's still on the table...just had to take a long break from it due to the June LSAT.

It's due June 10th so I need to make significant re-writes and would appreciate if ppl could look at it at that point.

Thanks so much for reading it, MusicNutMeggie, your advice was really helpful!

Sure thing. Gooood luck!

[Knock]

PM'd TrialJunky. Thank you so much! And thank you soooo much again MusicNutMeggie, I forgot to respond to your PM and I feel bad! especially since you gave me such great advice and criticism!