What is a Suitable Subject for a Negotiation Request?

[couchpizza]

So I wrote this awesome negotiation letter because I visited the school and just loaded up on things I liked about them to talk about...but I can't think of a good subject for it.

Scholarship Reconsideration
Merit Aid Reconsideration
Interested in Merit Aid

HELP PLZ
Gracias

[burtmacklin]

I'm thinking of going with Merit Aid Availability Inquiry, but wtf do I know lol

[PrideandGlory1776]

Financial Aid Inquiry - sounds innocuous yet it's unmistakeably concise and to the point

[chargers]

I've had success thus far with the subject Scholarship Increase Request. FWIW.

[Mack.Hambleton]

IMMA NEED DAT MONEY

[AlanShore]

I've had success thus far with the subject Scholarship Increase Request. FWIW.