Disciplinary Action Addendum

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If anyone would be willing to critique my Disciplinary Action Addendum, that would be wonderful.

"In September of my senior year at the XYZ, I was disciplined for having alcohol in my on-campus house. I was twenty-one at the time. However, my campus was a dry campus, so I was in breach of the rules. I paid a $100 fine and attended an alcohol awareness class. I learned my lesson and lived in accord with the established rules for the rest of my time at the institution."

Thanks in advance.