two LOCI?? need brief advice :)

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two LOCI?? need brief advice :)

Postby gravityrides0 » Mon Mar 26, 2012 11:51 am

Hey guys-

I know it is a bit early, but I am planning on sending a LOCI to UCLA this week as I am trying to get off of a wait list. The reason I want to send one today is because I visited a class and took a tour a week ago and thought I would send it soon after to describe the experience and reiterate my interest after the tour. however, I also want to update them on what I have been doing and stuff like that. I wrote out a draft of a LOCI fulfilling these two purposes, but it's awkward and long for me to "switch gears" after half of the LOCI.

Since I am riding out the wait list, do you think it would be appropriate to just write about the visit in this LOCI and throw something in there like, "In May I plan to write to you again about my recent accomplishments and my continued interest in UCLA Law." almost like a "This was part I, stay tuned for part II?"

Let me know if you think this is appropriate or if you have considered doing something similar. Thank you!

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