Second draft, can't be worse.

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ProBoyMagic
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Second draft, can't be worse.

Postby ProBoyMagic » Fri Dec 02, 2011 3:19 am

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kublaikahn
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Re: Second draft, can't be worse.

Postby kublaikahn » Fri Dec 02, 2011 7:41 pm

You witnessed travesties on your one-two hour visit to muni court? But yeah, 75% of criminal defendants are indigent. You need a more interesting story to tell if you want to discuss this.

masked kavana
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Re: Second draft, can't be worse.

Postby masked kavana » Fri Dec 02, 2011 7:57 pm

"I wanted to be a shepherd to those who were lost and felt marginalized by legal society"

For some reason this comes across as kind of condescending. Perhaps find a lighter word than sheperd?




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