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My Personal Statement

Post by anon3 » Sat Jan 08, 2011 1:56 pm

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Re: My Personal Statement

Post by LSATclincher » Sat Jan 08, 2011 2:18 pm

There is not enough about you. First 2 para's are merely a sad story you witnessed. Who cares? Para 3 is very good. You should probably focus on this, especially if you're coming right out of college w/ little life experience.

The last 2 para's are frankly over-ambitious. You cannot predict your legal future in this economic climate. Stick w/ concluding your PS with character traits that will allow you to survive and then thrive in the legal field.

I think you have some nice experience to build upon. Just focus on sticking to personal experience that built your character.

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