Read it and rip it, please...

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JakeL

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Read it and rip it, please...

Postby JakeL » Thu Aug 05, 2010 9:14 pm

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SullaFelix

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Re: Read it and rip it, please...

Postby SullaFelix » Thu Aug 05, 2010 10:41 pm

As my cycling career continues, I have since discovered another passion. In the fall of 2008, I began working at the [Fed Agency] as a paralegal. Shortly thereafter, I participated in a trial at the [federal] Court. For me, that participation was akin to the moments following my crash, as it elevated my interest in law to a fervid enthusiasm.


A lot more of this, a lot less of everything else. The cycling stuff may be interesting and say something about you, but I have doubts whether law schools are going to see a real connection between that and the traits that would make them want to admit someone.



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