Can you please review my scholarship negotiation letter?
Posted: Thu Apr 04, 2013 11:18 pm
Just got admitted to GULC, a much better school than I currently go to. I go to a T2, ranked 50-59, and am paying sticker price. I am going to try and negotiate a scholarship with my current school. This is the letter I am planning on sending them. Good idea? Bad idea? Any comments or suggestions? Thanks in advanced, you guys, and especially to "Hutz_and_Goodman" - I Ctrl-C'd most of the stuff you suggested I say.
I love the University of T2, and I want to continue my legal education here. I have developed strong relationships with all of my professors, the study body, and the community. Once I graduate, I will be a great representative of this school.
Unfortunately I understand that law school is, at the end of the day, a financial investment. Although almost sixty percent of my class received merit-based scholarships, I will be paying over forty thousand dollars per year in tuition alone over the next two years. Since matriculation I have already proven my legal aptitude, by earning perfect marks in all of my doctrinal classes and being the only student in the 1L class to earn multiple CALI awards. I am, however, beginning to second guess the viability of my investment. It is a tough job market.
Today I was admitted as a transfer to Georgetown University. Although Georgetown is a bit more expensive in tuition, I will be able to move back in with my parents for the remainder of law school. I want to stay here. I love this city, I love this school, and if University of T2 can help make it work financially, I will not only commit to stay here, I will do anything and everything I can to add to the professional reputation and prestige of 2L.
I love the University of T2, and I want to continue my legal education here. I have developed strong relationships with all of my professors, the study body, and the community. Once I graduate, I will be a great representative of this school.
Unfortunately I understand that law school is, at the end of the day, a financial investment. Although almost sixty percent of my class received merit-based scholarships, I will be paying over forty thousand dollars per year in tuition alone over the next two years. Since matriculation I have already proven my legal aptitude, by earning perfect marks in all of my doctrinal classes and being the only student in the 1L class to earn multiple CALI awards. I am, however, beginning to second guess the viability of my investment. It is a tough job market.
Today I was admitted as a transfer to Georgetown University. Although Georgetown is a bit more expensive in tuition, I will be able to move back in with my parents for the remainder of law school. I want to stay here. I love this city, I love this school, and if University of T2 can help make it work financially, I will not only commit to stay here, I will do anything and everything I can to add to the professional reputation and prestige of 2L.