Should I send my assignment again?
Posted: Fri Jul 26, 2019 12:20 am
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Thanks everyone for advice!
Thanks everyone for advice!
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I would amend this to say that the language in your email shouldn't be that you fixed some typos, but that you cleaned up some language or wording or that you tightened things up a little bit. It's all about framing it to seem as though you made it better, not that you fixed something stupid.justanotherlurker wrote:Nothing to worry about. That said, if you wanted to send a revised version and just say "If you haven't started reviewing, here's a revised version, where I fixed a couple typos" -- that's fine too.
That said, are you sure the assignment called for a 17+ page, 6000-word memo? Honestly, I can't image that the senior associate has the time to read something that long. Was there a clear, short summary on the top? If not, I'd add one, and just say you're sending a revised version with a summary for convenience. What's the senior associate going to do with the 20 pages of case law summaries? If it's going to end up a paragraph or a page in a brief, that should basically be your summary. (E.g., "The case law is clear that the XX law in YY jurisdiction requires A, B, and C to establish ZZ -- and plaintiffs have not met their burden. [cites]")
Yes--get good at this. Messaging matters.I would amend this to say that the language in your email shouldn't be that you fixed some typos, but that you cleaned up some language or wording or that you tightened things up a little bit. It's all about framing it to seem as though you made it better, not that you fixed something stupid.