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Anyone willing to look over my cover letter?

Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 10:52 am
by piccolittle
As it says in the subject. I'm applying to job fairs at the moment, and thinking about mass mails as soon as I get the rest of my grades in. I wrote this cover letter quickly and it sounds like one of those "I have fancy words but don't say anything" fluff pieces. Advice and general ripping to shreds would be much appreciated! I will PM it to you if you respond.

Re: Anyone willing to look over my cover letter?

Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 3:26 pm
by piccolittle
Bump. Anyone else? Seriously, the more input I can get, the better.

Re: Anyone willing to look over my cover letter?

Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 6:08 pm
by thegrayman
just a quick Q, are you referring to yourself as a "rising 2L" or "rising second year" or "second year" or otherwise? Trying to figure out what to use.

Re: Anyone willing to look over my cover letter?

Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 6:20 pm
by piccolittle
thegrayman wrote:just a quick Q, are you referring to yourself as a "rising 2L" or "rising second year" or "second year" or otherwise? Trying to figure out what to use.
I'm going with "rising second-year student."

Re: Anyone willing to look over my cover letter?

Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2012 6:39 pm
by piccolittle
Sigh. Bumping this - mass mails going out soon and I want to take all the derp out of my cover letters. Anyone else willing to have a look?

Thanks!

Re: Anyone willing to look over my cover letter?

Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2012 6:46 pm
by Ludo!
I'll take a look. Didn't do job fairs but did tons of mass mailing