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EDUCATION
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Bachelor of Science, Bioengineering
Minor: Entrepreneurship, Family, and Small Business
• Expected Graduation Date: May 2015
• Cumulative Grade Point Average: 3.735

EXPERIENCE
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Undergraduate Research Assistant, Extraction of Sugars for Biofuels, Bioengineering May - August 2012 & 2013
• Executed laboratory protocols, such as simultaneous isomerization and reactive extraction.
• Collected data and maintained a detailed log of experimental results.
• Communicated results to fellow research students, as well as the primary investigator.

Ethicon Endo-Surgery, a Johnson & Johnson Company, Cincinnati, Ohio
Research and Development Engineering Co-op January 2013 – May 2013
• Analyzed data using Minitab computer software.
• Offered solutions to design issues on current medical devices.
• Developed concepts for use in the creation of a test method for cutting speed.
• Designed and improved upon testing equipment for cutting speed.
• Communicated with suppliers to manufacture equipment.

Wright-Patterson Air Force Base, Dayton, Ohio
Research and Development Co-op Student August 2013 – December 2013, May 2014 – August 2014
• Conducted squat-stand testing and analyzed data.
• Collected data on inertial measurement units to determine the effects of sensor drift.
• Developed MATLAB code to analyze inertial measurement unit data.
• Wrote and executed a procedure for testing of a heating and cooling patient litter.
• Communicated test results to contracted companies for improvement of the patient litter.

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Bioengineering Peer Mentor August 2014 – Present
• Execute lesson plans in group meetings once a week with freshmen in the Bioengineering program.
• Assist students with homework, core classes, and getting acquainted with college life.

HONORS AND AWARDS
• Honors Program, Fall 2010-Present
• Choose Ohio First For Engineering and Entrepreneurship Scholarship, Fall 2010-Present
• President’s List, Summer 2012
• Dean’s List, Fall 2010, 2011, 2012, Spring 2012, 2014

COLLEGIATE ACTIVITIES
• Teaching Our Kids – President and Founder January 2013 – Present
• Tau Beta Pi – Treasurer January 2013 – May 2013
• Engineers Without Borders – Ability Center Project Chair and Student Member January 2010 – December 2011
• Biomedical Engineering Society – Vice President August 2014 – Present
• Engineering Council – Student Member (appointed) August 2014 – Present

PERSONAL
• Interests include running and stock watching.

You already had this resume revised by several people, including me. I see you didn't implement a lot of the suggestions you were given, so just go back and reread the earlier thread.

And your interest section is way too generic. You need to add another item or two, and you need to try and make the two existing items not sound like the most boring things ever.

rinkrat19 wrote:try and make the two existing items not sound like the most boring things ever.

For real. At least put technical analysis, because who actually enjoys stock watching?

VMeyer4 wrote:stock watching.

lol...?

Other than that, I've heard it's best practice to put your most recent experiences near the top, so I would switch the order of your Experiences section.