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"blah blah and blah are what makes it the law school I most wish to attend"

how bad does this sound as an ending for a why x school addendum

Are you esl

Come on man it's a 1-page essay, don't mail it in!

help me out bros, I'm about to say screw it and just send it in, do they even read this shit?

"Location, biglaw placement, and hot women are what makes your school the law school I most wish to attend."

sounds ESL as fuck

PeanutsNJam wrote:"Location, biglaw placement, and hot women are what makes your school the law school I most wish to attend."

sounds ESL as fuck

damn, any suggestions to make is less esl sounding?

It's one page, so it really should have one constant narrative.
Make the re-affirmation of that narrative your concluding sentence.

Will_McAvoy wrote:Are you esl

Your tact, wit, and avatar are what makes your posts the posts I most wish to read.

On an unrelated note, should I put on my app that im retaking in sept or leave it out?

Also, do employers care if you've got a couple years btw graduating and starting law school and you don't really have anything to show, i've just been traveling/family business

Dirigo wrote:

Will_McAvoy wrote:Are you esl

Your tact, wit, and avatar are what makes your posts the posts I most wish to read.

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Will_McAvoy wrote:Are you esl

I used to tutor 1st year freshman writing. That's exactly how the average frosh finishes an expository essay. Because everything about law school is a joke, no one will really care. But it might be a nice idea to take more pride in your work, op.