Addendum Critique
Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2012 4:16 am
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You took her remarks seriously, not serious.
In general I think they could all be a lot shorter.
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Thank you for your reply and your advice. I will make that grammatical change and I can work on shortening each of them. Any other advice?oaken wrote:You took her remarks seriously, not serious.
In general I think they could all be a lot shorter.