Addendum Help
Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2012 4:20 pm
I need to write a GPA addendum to explain a year and a half of bad grades.
While the first year was due mainly to immaturity I also worked 25 hrs a week from 8PM-4AM at a bar. This impacted my grades considering I had no time to study and was always exhausted and missed classes. My sophomore year was back on track until my brother wrecked his car half way through the semester. He entered a coma for a week. The doctors were telling us that he may not live. Of course, this happened to be around midterm tests. This threw off my studying and contributed to a complete lack of focus and even caring about my grades. I only wanted him to live. The spring semester of my sophomore year I earned a 3.83. The following summer I took one class and received an A. The fall semester I earned a 3.0. Once again I was impacted by family trouble. My great aunt had fallen and broken her hip as well as had a pacemaker put in right before finals week. While we weren't as close during my adolescent years, during my childhood we had so much fun. I should mention that all of my grades were borderline AB at this point. Therefore, I was worried more about my family than I was my grades. I received the lower of the grades in all of my classes. The following semester I received my first 4.0 in college taking 20 hrs as well as working an internship. In the summer I took another 14 hours and received another 4.0. The final semester of my college career is upon me. I have grown tremendously over these 3 1/2 years. I began as an immature kid with tons of potential, without any focus or motivation. I have now ended up as a man with focus, determination, resiliency, and maturity. My earlier college grades are a reflection of the person that I was, the latter are more a representation of the man that I have become.
Please tear this apart!! I am applying t-14 I know they will be stretches with a 3.2. I am currently PT 170+ hoping to get mid 170s by test time. This was written hastily so please tear up grammar as well.
While the first year was due mainly to immaturity I also worked 25 hrs a week from 8PM-4AM at a bar. This impacted my grades considering I had no time to study and was always exhausted and missed classes. My sophomore year was back on track until my brother wrecked his car half way through the semester. He entered a coma for a week. The doctors were telling us that he may not live. Of course, this happened to be around midterm tests. This threw off my studying and contributed to a complete lack of focus and even caring about my grades. I only wanted him to live. The spring semester of my sophomore year I earned a 3.83. The following summer I took one class and received an A. The fall semester I earned a 3.0. Once again I was impacted by family trouble. My great aunt had fallen and broken her hip as well as had a pacemaker put in right before finals week. While we weren't as close during my adolescent years, during my childhood we had so much fun. I should mention that all of my grades were borderline AB at this point. Therefore, I was worried more about my family than I was my grades. I received the lower of the grades in all of my classes. The following semester I received my first 4.0 in college taking 20 hrs as well as working an internship. In the summer I took another 14 hours and received another 4.0. The final semester of my college career is upon me. I have grown tremendously over these 3 1/2 years. I began as an immature kid with tons of potential, without any focus or motivation. I have now ended up as a man with focus, determination, resiliency, and maturity. My earlier college grades are a reflection of the person that I was, the latter are more a representation of the man that I have become.
Please tear this apart!! I am applying t-14 I know they will be stretches with a 3.2. I am currently PT 170+ hoping to get mid 170s by test time. This was written hastily so please tear up grammar as well.