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LOCI Critique

Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 6:07 pm
by ilove_toshop
Hello! Is anyone willing to read my LOCI and give me feedback? Let me know and I will PM you :)

Thanks!

Re: LOCI Critique

Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 6:14 pm
by txadv11
Yes

Re: LOCI Critique

Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 6:21 pm
by JustE
txadv11 wrote:Yes
+1

Re: LOCI Critique

Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2011 1:52 am
by ilove_toshop
if anyone else would like to help as well that'd be great! :)

Re: LOCI Critique

Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2011 3:46 pm
by CrimLaw300
Send it over

Re: LOCI Critique

Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2011 4:08 pm
by CanadianWolf
Yes, if you PM it to me.

P.S. Are you now displeased with your professional editing service ?

Re: LOCI Critique

Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2011 8:35 pm
by peterb0y
send it my way--also could you look over mine? thanks!

Re: LOCI Critique

Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2011 8:45 pm
by CanadianWolf
Not sure if this thread is legitimate since the OP already has claimed to have used a professional editing service.